Remember, first impressions are everything! When a reader picks up your book in a bookstore, they'll open it to the first page. If you're querying an agent, they may only ask for the first ten pages. This is your chance to make a lasting impression.... and, if you missed the mark, they may put it aside after the first page.

Send in your first 50 pages (up to 12.5k words), and Dr. Rob Porteous (one of the Farland Fiction coaches featured in this collection) will advise you on ensuring your opening hooks the reader. He'll also provide a detailed written critique of how well you have established your world, kicked off your plot, and whether your characters are compelling, as well as how to fix things that need it.

You can follow this up with a two-hour video consultation to discuss writing, your book, and Rob's advice to ensure you're on the right track. Rob is in Australia, but don't worry—you'll be able to negotiate a mutually suitable time!