James Bell
CREATOR
about 1 year ago

Project Update: Backers Draft Manuscript Part 4 - The World Below + Storyguide Wisdom

“Trust not Kaos.” That was something my mother said before her death. It feels pertinent to write it out now.

Genrik is gone. We still have his maps, but he is gone. He started screaming and pointing. We could barely make out his words from his wretched cries, but it became clear by the end: we were never in Mud Town. We were never skyward. We’ve been wandering a labyrinth of the mind.

That Kaos portal from weeks ago took us into the Obscura, and we’ve been in this dreaming realm ever since. Fyrn, Joanne, and I somehow erected mental shields, but Genrik… I think a part of him could penetrate the dream, and when the veil came crashing down, he lost it.

We overpowered the Obscura once we realized, but now, not only do we not know where Genrik is, we don’t know where we are.

Where are we?


Hello Diggers,

We're *so close* to unlocking our Mobile Wallpaper celebration and then closing in on the second section for our adventure! We're coming to the end of the quiet period in a campaign - kinda like our Kalm season, but without Kaos storms - and about to gear up for our final week. Please continue to spread the word so we can get everyone safely into our settlement before it's too late! And let's see if we can't unlock a Stretch Goal or two before we cross the finish line!

Of course, the big draw today is the next section of our draft manuscript! With a chapter titles The World Below, we're going to get lots of good stuff in this one!


BACKER FEEDBACK

We crowdfund these projects because Backers Make It Better, and sharing the draft manuscript sections allow us to note errata or point out parts that need clarification. Onyx Path has created a special The World Below Feedback Form that you can use to submit any corrections or comments directly to the development and writing team so they can have some guidance during the next rounds of development and editing.

To submit Feedback directly to the writers and developers, please use this form, which you can access here <THE WORLD BELOW MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK FORM>



DRAFT MANUSCRIPT PREVIEWS - BACKERS ONLY

Remember, thanks to BackerKit magic, these download links are visible to Backers only - you must be logged in and reading this on the website to have access to the manuscript preview links. So, if you're reading this via e-mail, click that "Read The Update" link on the bottom and I'll see you below the title treatment...



Includes Backer-Exclusive Content
World Below Mobile Wallpaper
Goal: $46,000 reached! — We did it! This project reached this goal!
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