James Bell
CREATOR
about 1 year ago

Project Update: Backer Draft Manuscript Part 3 - Thesis, Synthesis, and Sorcery!

Genrik doesn’t know where we are, but the ground is soft, the earth above our heads is more clay than rock, and torches are placed along this passage. 

That’s right, torches! 

I can’t see any sunflies and the lichen here is sparing. Could we be skyward? I’ve heard tell of the people of Mud Town and Tark, and how they produce their own sources of illumination… But I found a discarded, damaged tower hammer beneath one of them. Why would a weapon from Fortress be all the way up here?

Don’t be mistaken, I should be ashamed. If my theory is correct, we’re in exactly the wrong place. But if the Union has a guildhouse in the next settlement we find, what kind of reward might await us for finding a Kaos portal leading here?


Hello Diggers!

Before we get to today's manuscript and unleash Kaotic Sorcery upon the world, I just wanted to let you know about a ONE DAY SALE happening at DriveThruRPG. The ashcan edition preview for The World Below, released while the game was still being put together as a taste of what was to come, is available FOR FREE for TODAY ONLY.

HALLOWEEN TREAT: THE WORLD BELOW ASHCAN EDITION PREVIEW PDF

Of course, as a backer of this campaign, you have access to the complete draft manuscript for the book, so you'll notice some tweaks and adjustments from where Matthew was at when the ashcan edition came out. Fun to see into the process! And to see how far they've come!

Speaking of which, we're at the halfway point for this campaign! With two weeks behind us and two weeks more to go, we've come a long way but still have many more layers to uncover as we descend further into The World Below! Please continue to spread the word in your social circles and on your social media. Let's unlock some more Stretch Goals, let's find many new backers and build our own settlement! And let's get more eyes on the manuscript to provide feedback to the editors and developers!


BACKER FEEDBACK

We crowdfund these projects because Backers Make It Better, and sharing the draft manuscript sections allow us to note errata or point out parts that need clarification. Onyx Path has created a special The World Below Feedback Form that you can use to submit any corrections or comments directly to the development and writing team so they can have some guidance during the next rounds of development and editing.

To submit Feedback directly to the writers and developers, please use this form, which you can access here <THE WORLD BELOW MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK FORM>



DRAFT MANUSCRIPT PREVIEWS - BACKERS ONLY

Remember, thanks to BackerKit magic, these download links are visible to Backers only - you must be logged in and reading this on the website to have access to the manuscript preview links. So, if you're reading this via e-mail, click that "Read The Update" link on the bottom and I'll see you below the title treatment...




Includes Backer-Exclusive Content
World Below Mobile Wallpaper
Goal: $46,000 reached! — We did it! This project reached this goal!
100%
0
Share

Share

Twitter

Facebook

Copy Link

Edit
Comments 0
Loading