James Bell
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about 1 year ago

Project Update: Backers Draft Manuscript Part 2 - Systems!

We made a mistake. We’re resting for just a couple of hours before moving further. Joanne says she doesn’t know how far the tenebrals will follow us. They’re creatures of darkness, we think, but does that mean they’re attracted to light — to snuff it out — or they’ll only prey on us in the gloom?

I don’t know, but they got Sharpstone. He swung his void sickle for dear life, but I think it strengthened the shadows… I saw them wrap around him, pry his armor open, and just like that, he was a shadow… 

It was an error to pry out so many of those blue jewels. They were locking something in the walls, and as we secured our findings, the place filled with living darkness. Or unliving? I don’t know. 

I don’t know.

Genrik can still lead us back to where we were on the Manyways Dark. We may have lost our Alchemist, but there’s still four of us. We can make it.



Hello Diggers!

Are you ready for Systems? Because today we're getting two chapters from The World Below draft manuscript, with the Storypath Ultra system chapter and a chapter covering all of the survival systems in the game.


BACKER FEEDBACK

We crowdfund these projects because Backers Make It Better, and sharing the draft manuscript sections allow us to note errata or point out parts that need clarification. Onyx Path has created a special The World Below Feedback Form that you can use to submit any corrections or comments directly to the development and writing team so they can have some guidance during the next rounds of development and editing.

To submit Feedback directly to the writers and developers, please use this form, which you can access here <THE WORLD BELOW MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK FORM>



DRAFT MANUSCRIPT PREVIEWS - BACKERS ONLY

Remember, thanks to BackerKit magic, these download links are visible to Backers only - you must be logged in and reading this on the website to have access to the manuscript preview links. So, if you're reading this via e-mail, click that "Read The Update" link on the bottom and I'll see you below the title treatment...

Includes Backer-Exclusive Content
Ed Greenwood's Monstrous Ecology PDF will be added as a bonus reward for backers
Goal: $39,000 reached! — We did it! This project reached this goal!
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