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Project Update: Quick Characters - Manuscript Preview #7
At last we come to the final manuscript preview. With this update, the entire current draft manuscript is available for Backers to download and read, before any pledges are processed or any payments collected.
We've actually had the bulk of the setting and Charms for a few weeks, plus the Martial Arts, Sorcery, and Artifacts all came to us last week. With this final section of the manuscript, we get to see all of this come together in the character write-ups of some of the movers and shakers in the world of the Alchemicals!
Chapter Eight: Quick Characters provides traits for Alchemicals, machine spirits, and gremlins, including information and templates that Storytellers can use to create their own machine spirits.
As a reminder, the developers want your feedback! These manuscript previews are of the current draft manuscript – the document in its latest, approved form. This may not be the final form after editing and any additional development, but you can consider it about 95% finished, so keep that in mind.
Shipping Costs will be Collected in the Pledge Manager
The best we can do at this point is to plan carefully, advise everyone up front that international shipping will likely be expensive (see our projections on the main page) and only charge what it costs us when the time comes. We’ll be charging for shipping in the Pledge Manager once the books are being printed and we can deal with the actual shipping charges rather than using our best-guesses this far out. If you live outside the US and aren't sure you want the hardcover or other physical items, you can pledge to the PDF tier now and upgrade your pledge in the Pledge Manager once we know the final shipping costs.
Final Stretch Goals
At $145,000 in Funding - ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Gods from the Machine - Expanded information on the Eight Divine Ministers, the Third Circle souls of Autochthon, as well as the Alchemical machine saints who serve the Divine Ministers in pursuit of their agendas.
Beyond that, we've got one more shoot-for-the-moon goal that may require a pretty long Backer Train to reach, but looks pretty awesome and I'd love to get there!
At $150,000 in Funding - ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Locust Crusades and Grasshopper Diplomacy - A Storyteller guide for playing out the first contact between Autochthonia and Creation and the myriad scenarios that might unfold once the Seal of Eight Divinities has been broken.
Again, we'll go over the Stretch Goal rewards tomorrow! We've already unlocked many expansions to our bonus reward, but a few tantalizing possibilities sit within our grasp!
DRAFT MANUSCRIPT PREVIEWS - BACKERS ONLY
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Project Update: The Forge has Cooled!
I don't know the correct metaphor, but the campaign has ended! In a triumphant fashion!
Thanks to the support of more than 1,930 backers, Onyx Path will be able to develop and print deluxe hardcover editions for Alchemicals: Forged by the Machine God!
Not only did we come really close to 2000 backers, we extended the campaign with a last minute Backer Train taking us into Overtime!! That was cool! It's still a recent feature, but we love testing out new bits and seeing how much more fun we can have with our campaigns.
There's more to celebrate! Not only did we fund the project in the first day, we also unlocked SIXTEEN Stretch Goals. From standard Onyx Path milestone markers to an expanded Companion full of more options for your game!
It came down to the last few days but we managed to hit every Stretch Goal we'd posted and then unlocked ONE MORE STRETCH GOAL in the final minutes of the campaign!
That's right - the backer train at the end took us just past $160,000 and one more special addition to our Alchemicals Companion! Eagle-eyed backers noticed a quiet $160,000 Achievement listed in the Community section without any further details. Well, I don't like to promise things that we may not hit, so didn't really flesh it out until the final minutes, but we managed to add one final expansion...
[ACHIEVED] At $160,000 in Funding - ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Might of the Machine-Titans - A collection of high-Essence Alchemical Charms designed for colossi, along with the terrifying Collapsing Point of Judgment style, a martial art that only colossi can master.
Our Bonus Reward Collection
Some Milestone Markers
A NEW ADD ON
NEW CONTENT - EXPANDING A SUPPLEMENT
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Lost City of Tekun - The disappearance of the metropolis Tekun is a mystery to the Eight Nations — but now, the truth is revealed. Cast though the Seal of Eight Divinities, the lost city has survived deep in the vast underground caverns of Creation. Its people still preserve the Octet’s culture and faith despite their isolation from the Machine God, a flickering light of hope amidst the many perils of the deep.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Forge of Legends - Additional Storyteller advice and plot hooks for Alchemical campaigns, whether in Autochthonia or Creation.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Beyond the Eight Nations - An expansion of Autochthonia’s reaches and those who dwell within: tunnel folk societies, Alchemical outcasts, and gruesome horrors born of the Blight.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: God-Machinery of Exalted Power -A panoply of Alchemical Charms and submodule upgrades, as well as Light-Sharpening Blade style, a martial art that makes use of beamklaves.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Ever-Spreading Blight -Quick Character traits for Apostates, those Alchemicals corrupted by Autochthon’s Blight, and the lesser gremlins that stalk the Realm of Brass and Shadows.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Industrial Assembly of the Chosen -Quick Character traits for Alchemical heroes from across the Eight Nations — and Creation.
[ACHIEVED]ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Ramos-Autrama, Riven by War - Once, Ramos-Autrama was not one city, but two: one from Yugash, and one from Sova. In the wake of the bitter War of Ashes between the two nations, the two war-torn metropoli found themselves forced together by Autochthonia’s theotectonic movements, isolated from both nations. Now, only the intervention of foreign powers keeps the city’s divided populace from turning on each other and restarting the war.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Servants of the Machine God - Quick Character traits for a variety of machine spirits found in the Realm of Brass and Shadow.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Gods from the Machine - Expanded information on the Eight Divine Ministers, the Third Circle souls of Autochthon, as well as the Alchemical machine saints who serve the Divine Ministers in pursuit of their agendas.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Locust Crusades and Grasshopper Diplomacy - A Storyteller guide for playing out the first contact between Autochthonia and Creation and the myriad scenarios that might unfold once the Seal of Eight Divinities has been broken.
That last one was an amazing surpise!
SIXTEEN STRETCH GOALS
And all of that is, of course, on top of our main purpose here - the creating of the actual book itself! This is the real reward - everything else is a bonus!
So a huge congratulations to Danielle and Chazz and Vance and the team on this project, and to all of the backers who've joined in to make this possible. I'm happy about the goals we hit and rewards we introduced, but I'm also always amazed and excited about having more than 1000 backers join in during this campaign, and we nearly doubled that dream target! Exalted fans are always a delight, and I'm happy that I get to share in the excitement and enthusiasm in my own little corner of the project!
AN EXTRA THANK YOU!
COMMUNICATION
I'll also see if I can sneak a compiled draft manuscript out to you maybe in the final week of the year. Nothing changed, just smashed together in order.
TO CONTACT ME
- Via E-Mail: Onyx.Kickstarter [at] gmail.com
- Via BackerKit: Click "Need Help?" from your forthcoming survey page, and then fill in the Contact Us form. BackerKit will pass your message along to me.
ONYX PATH DISCUSSION CHANNELS
- Onyx Path's Discord
- Onyx Path's Exalted Forums
- Onyx Path on Reddit
- Exalted subReddit
- Onyx Path's Facebook
Backers make it better! That's the real Alchemy happening here.
The Discord is particularly lively, and I loved seeing the thoughts and jokes as the chapters came out bit by bit.
BackerKit will begin collected pledges and processing payments later tonight, so be ready for that.
High fives all around in the comment section and on the Discord, and you'll hear from me again in a month-or-so when I've got the pledge manager set up and ready to roll out!
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Project Update: Final Days Review - Stretch Goals
We're not quite in the final 24 hours, but getting very close! Within these last hours, I wanted to review some important topics, most especially our current Stretch Goal situation! Let's get reviewin'!
We're in the Final Days countdown for this Crowdfunding campaign. Alchemicals: Forged by the Machine God finishes the crowdfunding campaign on Thursday,December 12th at 2:00 PM EST. There's still time to assemble a few more backers, but we're definitely getting closer to the finish line. With that in mind, I wanted to touch on some of the basics over these final four days to make sure everyone has the information they need to support this project in the way that works best for them.
Final Days Schedule
- Dec 9 - - Reward Tier & Add On Review
- Dec 10 - Manuscript Preview # 7 - Chapter 8: Quick Characters
- Dec 11 - Stretch Goal Review (that's today!)
- Dec 12 - Final Day Checklist & What Comes Next
Whether you're the size of a Metropolis or are just rolling off the assembly line, these are some good topics to review over this week to make sure we all end up where we want to be.
(An aside, if you're a new backer, make sure you check out our Final Week Countdown / Resource Update. It has links to the manuscript previews, podcast and panels, and other helpful information.)
Refresher Course
Alchemicals are created to defend and uplift the peoples of Autochthonia and sometimes Autochthonia itself. Chazz, Monica, and Terry talk machine saints, castes , gremlins, and the philosophical implications of going from person, to walking small house, to opinionated city. Listen to the latest episode <here>
MANUSCRIPT PREVIEW - As noted, the complete Preview Manuscript for the book is available for you to review prior to the conclusion of the campaign. If you're a backer, you'll have access to this preview manuscript after the campaign. Remember, though, there are still some minor edits, development and proofing that need to be done, but you can consider it most of the way there and a good representation of what you'll get in the final book. Making the manuscript available for review before the campaign ends ensures that everyone knows exactly what our goal is - making this book - and are on board with our aims for this project. Thanks for your support, we're all in this together!
PLEDGE TIERS - This update breaks down your best starting point for figuring out which Backer Reward Tier to choose to help support this project in a way that works for you.
POPULAT HERO
This is the PDF-only reward tier. So, if you're saving trees or saving shelf space - or avoiding the shipping charges that are absolutely ever-increasing - this is the reward tier option that you should begin with. The PDF will be fulfilled by our partners at DriveThruRPG.com - when it is ready, you will receive a link to add it to your DTRPG library at no cost for you to download at your leisure.
ALCHEMICAL CHAMPION
This reward tier includes the deluxe hardcover version of this book. Shipping costs ARE NOT included in the cost of your pledge. You will be charged for shipping after the campaign through the pledge manager. In addition, this option also includes the PDF version, so you will get a digital copy as described above.
Choose Wisely
Over the past 27 (almost 28?) days as we've worked through this campaign, we've not only funded the book but also unlocked FOURTEEN Stretch Goal targets! That's right - we've unlocked a Stretch Goal that was just announced yesterday!
MILESTONE MARKERS
[ACHIEVED] BACKER SHIRT DESIGN - An Alcehmicals-themed Backer shirt will be hosted on Onyx Path’s Redbubble store for a limited time. Backers will be notified when the shirt becomes available for purchase.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS Digital Wallpaper - Awesome Alchemical Exalted artwork will be used to create a wallpaper for your computer desktop. This digital wallpaper will be added to the rewards list of all backers supporting this project.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS VTT Token Pack – Digital assets will be created to support online play for Alchemcials, including key character and creature tokens from the book. This online asset pack will be added to the rewards list of all backers.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS STREAMING OVERLAY - A set of overlays for your online game will be created, for your use when streaming your Alchemicals session. This reward will be added to the rewards list for all backers.
A NEW ADD ON
[ACHIEVED] NEW ADD ON: ALCHEMICALS STORYTELLER SCREEN - A three-panel Storyteller Reference Screen with charts and information for running an Alchemicals game will be created and offered as an Add On to any hardcover reward tiers for +$25.
NEW CONTENT - EXPANDING A SUPPLEMENT
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Lost City of Tekun - The disappearance of the metropolis Tekun is a mystery to the Eight Nations — but now, the truth is revealed. Cast though the Seal of Eight Divinities, the lost city has survived deep in the vast underground caverns of Creation. Its people still preserve the Octet’s culture and faith despite their isolation from the Machine God, a flickering light of hope amidst the many perils of the deep.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Forge of Legends - Additional Storyteller advice and plot hooks for Alchemical campaigns, whether in Autochthonia or Creation.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Beyond the Eight Nations - An expansion of Autochthonia’s reaches and those who dwell within: tunnel folk societies, Alchemical outcasts, and gruesome horrors born of the Blight.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: God-Machinery of Exalted Power -A panoply of Alchemical Charms and submodule upgrades, as well as Light-Sharpening Blade style, a martial art that makes use of beamklaves.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: The Ever-Spreading Blight -Quick Character traits for Apostates, those Alchemicals corrupted by Autochthon’s Blight, and the lesser gremlins that stalk the Realm of Brass and Shadows.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Industrial Assembly of the Chosen -Quick Character traits for Alchemical heroes from across the Eight Nations — and Creation.
[ACHIEVED]ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Ramos-Autrama, Riven by War - Once, Ramos-Autrama was not one city, but two: one from Yugash, and one from Sova. In the wake of the bitter War of Ashes between the two nations, the two war-torn metropoli found themselves forced together by Autochthonia’s theotectonic movements, isolated from both nations. Now, only the intervention of foreign powers keeps the city’s divided populace from turning on each other and restarting the war.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Servants of the Machine God - Quick Character traits for a variety of machine spirits found in the Realm of Brass and Shadow.
[ACHIEVED] ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Gods from the Machine - Expanded information on the Eight Divine Ministers, the Third Circle souls of Autochthon, as well as the Alchemical machine saints who serve the Divine Ministers in pursuit of their agendas.
I've got to say, I've loved the stuff that I've read in the manuscript, and as always, the book makes me hungry for more! And the Companion supplement that we've assembled - forged - via Stretch Goal achievement looks to deliver on a lot of the stuff I want!
But... more?
We've got one more Stretch Goal target on the horizon. I though this was gonna be one we'd have to run a long backer train for, but it certainly seems within grasp over this final day!
At $150,000 in Funding - ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Locust Crusades and Grasshopper Diplomacy - A Storyteller guide for playing out the first contact between Autochthonia and Creation and the myriad scenarios that might unfold once the Seal of Eight Divinities has been broken.
YOUR REWARDS!
NOT MUCH MORE TIME
ALCHEMICALS: FORGED BY THE MACHINE GOD enters OVERTIME MODE on Thursday, December 12th at 2:00 PM EST.
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Project Update: FINAL HOURS: CHECKLIST & WHAT COMES NEXT
Welcome to the final hours of this campaign! We've had a pretty great run - funding very quickly and coming up to the end with more than 1,850 backers! We've unlocked FIFTEEN Stretch Goals, adding some cool bonus rewards for supporters of this campaign!
That's right - we've unlocked every posted Stretch Goal for this project, including the final one that I'd thought we'd need a mighty backer train to achieve! Amazing Work!
[ACHIEVED] At $150,000 in Funding - ALCHEMICALS COMPANION: Locust Crusades and Grasshopper Diplomacy - A Storyteller guide for playing out the first contact between Autochthonia and Creation and the myriad scenarios that might unfold once the Seal of Eight Divinities has been broken.
That's a section for the Companion that I'm really excited about! I know these books are full of story hooks and adventure ideas, and there's always room in my imagination for more!
The most important part of this campaign, though, is that we have successfully funded this project! Thanks to everyone who's come out to support this campaign, we'll be getting this cool book!
As mentioned, backers will also receive a pile of Stretch Goals as bonus rewards, including the expanded Companion, the option for the Storyteller Screen Add On reward, a digital wallpaper, backer shirt design, digital tokens, and more!
FINAL DAY CHECKLIST
1. KNOW WHAT YOU'RE SUPPORTING
Backers can read the entire current draft of the manuscript <HERE>. Please make sure you read the manuscript before the campaign concludes so you know exactly what you're pledging to support.
2. PLEDGE TIERS and ADD ONS
The first decision you need to make in figuring out your reward tier is whether you want to receive the PDF version or the deluxe hardcover edition (which comes with a bonus PDF version).
This is the PDF-only reward tier. So, if you're saving trees or saving shelf space - or avoiding the shipping charges that are absolutely ever-increasing - this is the reward tier option that you should begin with. The PDF will be fulfilled by our partners at DriveThruRPG.com - when it is ready, you will receive a link to add it to your DTRPG library at no cost for you to download at your leisure.
This reward tier includes the deluxe hardcover version of this book. Shipping costs ARE NOT included in the cost of your pledge. You will be charged for shipping after the campaign through the pledge manager. In addition, this option also includes the PDF version, so you will get a digital copy as described above.
ADD ON selections will be available in the post-campaign Pledge Manager as well.
SO: Ensure that you've selected the Reward Tier you want, and select any Add On options you wish to include. AND - make sure that you are comfortable with the Pledge amount, in terms of it covering everything you want and the affordability of the pledge at this moment!
- Choose a Reward Tier You Can Afford
- Read the Manuscripts and Make Sure You Know What You're Getting
- Be Aware of the Projected Delivery Date (Onyx Path will try to deliver earlier than this, but the book will take some time to get perfect, and we're dealing with an imperfect world. Schedules sometimes go awry)
3. PAYMENT AND CONTACT INFORMATION
4. OVERTIME MODE
You’ll know we’re in Overtime Mode when the campaign’s Backer Train counter displays a bright rainbow border and a new countdown that resets to 10 minutes after each new backer joins that final Backer Train ride.
So, we've scheduled the campaign to conclude on December 12th at 2:00 pm EST, but it'll be extended in 10 minute chunks as long as backers keep pledging. Will we add an extra 10 minutes? An extra 20? Or will it all finish up as we programmed? Who knows, but we'll find out together! Alchemy indeed!
WHAT COMES NEXT?
5. AFTER THE CAMPAIGN ENDS
In addition to providing the crowdfunding platform for this campaign, BackerKit is also Onyx Path's regular Pledge Manager partner.
BackerKit provides a robust fulfillment integration and pledge management program that will allow us to work with all of the data and distribute the rewards to you. It will take me about a month to set the project up. Once I've got it all entered and built, the team from BackerKit will review to ensure I didn't mess anything up too badly, and then I'll make any changes they've suggested and we can move on to the Survey stage.
6. BACKERKIT SURVEYS
7. REWARD DISTRIBUTION
This is a long process, but I will send out regular updates (usually at the end of the month) to keep you up to speed on Onyx Path's progress. There will be strings of updates that are just "still working on it," but I will share new artwork or information when I can.
So - one final time - please spread the word to any potential backers and fans, and thanks so much for a great campaign!