The Mason of New Orleans and The Angel of Ecbatana • TWO novels of historical mystery and action with a touch of horror and the supernatural - BackerKit

The Mason of New Orleans and The Angel of Ecbatana • TWO novels of historical mystery and action with a touch of horror and the supernatural

The Mason of New Orleans and The Angel of Ecbatana • TWO novels of historical mystery and action with a touch of horror and the supernatural

by Charles M. Ryan

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Charles M. Ryan

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2 months ago

Hi, all, and thanks for backing (or considering) my books! I have a quick question for you, and it regards the intro text at the top of the campaign page. When I put that together (it's from the opening of the current draft of The Angel of Ecbatana), I thought it worked well to introduce a central conceit from the book. But then I thought maybe it's a bit redundant with Martin's little monolog that follows, and maybe it doesn't grab you as viscerally as it could. So I put together a few alternatives. And I asked folk about them on social media. The results were inconclusive, but the options that featured a lot of action, collectively, won out over the current text. So: here's where you can help. Here are two action-oriented alternatives. Which of these grabs you by the gut and makes you really HAVE to read the book?

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